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Incredible writing progress!

Here in Lime class this week, we've been working very hard on our Spring assessments. We finished our assessments by re-writing the story 'Goldilocks and the Three Bears'. We also wrote this story in our autumn assessment, so it was lovely to compare our pieces of writing and notice all of the progress we have made since then. Some of the comments shared by the children included: 

"My language is stronger, like in autumn I wrote 'hot porridge' and today I wrote 'flaming hot porridge"

"My handwriting is bigger - it's more legible!"

"I did less crossing out today because I felt more confident"

All the children should be so proud of themselves - well done Lime class!

Writing progess Lime class